Comments on: Point of Detachment by Jessica Vozel http://www.wordriot.org/archives/852 Good writing. No remorse. Wed, 08 Feb 2012 22:00:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: david erlewine http://www.wordriot.org/archives/852/comment-page-1#comment-102 david erlewine Sun, 28 Feb 2010 14:26:16 +0000 http://www.wordriot.org/?p=852#comment-102 "Or maybe he was nearly back to us, a half-hour away at the tree farm picking out a tree that he’d bring like an apologetic bouquet, but lost his way when he lost the finger that pointed him home." Perfect. “Or maybe he was nearly back to us, a half-hour away at the tree farm picking out a tree that he’d bring like an apologetic bouquet, but lost his way when he lost the finger that pointed him home.”

Perfect.

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