Comments on: My Sweet Warrior by David Erlewine

By: Guy Hogan

Guy Hogan — Fri, 21 May 2010 18:44:57 +0000

I wonder what Brice will do. I don’t have children but I know about the Spartans. I enjoyed the story. I just wonder what Brice will do. The way you presented the relationships between the father and son is a perfect example of “show don’t tell”. Excellent.

By: david e

david e — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 21:04:03 +0000

thanks everybody for the comments

By: Jason

Jason — Tue, 16 Mar 2010 17:01:48 +0000

It’s amazing how this story says so much with so few words!

By: Joe

Joe — Tue, 16 Mar 2010 13:55:23 +0000

I can relate the father’s hope and endless frustration. Excellent work David!!

By: Adam

Adam — Tue, 16 Mar 2010 13:38:18 +0000

Great stuff, Dave. I really enjoyed it!

By: Dawn Allison

Dawn Allison — Tue, 16 Mar 2010 00:23:24 +0000

Stunning.

By: antonios maltezos

antonios maltezos — Mon, 15 Mar 2010 20:55:56 +0000

Good and proper ending, David. Love it when the writer leaves something for me to bring home.